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Glen ([personal profile] intricate_engineer) wrote in [community profile] glowfic2016-01-15 12:50 pm

between then and know

It was a trap.
Glen should have seen it coming, but she'd thought the offer might be genuine. Wasn't the possibility of immortality worth the risk?
Well, not this time.
Her pendant, her way out, was broken.
She tried to use it anyway.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
The journal has a bunch of untranslated words too, but contains many decipherable tidbits that are useful or interesting.

For example, jotted notes on the theory of magic:

"[essence 1] and [essence 2] are opposites, but Nothing is sort of opposite [essence 1]..."

"Life and Air makes [essence 76], Life and Water makes [essence 82], Life and Earth makes [essence 88], Life and Fire makes [essence 94]? The first three make sense, but what's so fiery about [noun]s?..."

Recipes:

"[noun] [noun]: Life, [essence 88], [essence 94]. Much better than the book's." (A carefully drawn diagram follows, using the three indicated colours. Then there is a little cartoon of what might plausibly be a plant with rashers of bacon in place of flowers.)

Quite a long stretch of mostly-untranslated personal notes in the vein of "I [acted on] the [noun] today but I don't know if it'll stay [adjective]", and many others even less comprehensible at the current translation level.

And then:

"[Profane exclamation]! I'm a [profane adjective] [noun]! I almost [acted on] my essence spheres on the [noun]! [Proper noun] would've [acted on] me!"
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-23 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Motion, Force, Gravity, Unity, and Binding: no, no, no, no, and no.

Well, some of them are slightly better than completely wrong on some of the essences - Unity and Binding are wrong-but-not-that-wrong for [essence 2], and Motion and Force are wrong-but-not-that-wrong for [essence 1].