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Glen ([personal profile] intricate_engineer) wrote in [community profile] glowfic2016-01-15 12:50 pm

between then and know

It was a trap.
Glen should have seen it coming, but she'd thought the offer might be genuine. Wasn't the possibility of immortality worth the risk?
Well, not this time.
Her pendant, her way out, was broken.
She tried to use it anyway.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Darkness is a much worse match than Nothing for [essence 0].

Time is a poor match for [essence 2], about as bad as it was for [essence 1].
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
Lots and lots of recipe-diagrams. So many recipe-diagrams.

And:

"As the zeroth essence, [essence 0] represents the [state or condition] at the beginning of all things, even before the first essence, [essence 1]: the [state or condition] before the [noun]. [essence 2] brings the possibility of [noun] to the [adjective] [essence 1], and Light and Matter [act on] that possibility..."

"...[essence 0] is often [sensed] to [act on] other essences in combination, such as for example when it combines with Light to form its [noun], [essence 9], or with Life to form [essence 56]. But sometimes the result is more [adjective], as when [essence 2] and [essence 0] combine to form [essence 12], or more [adjective], as when Matter and [essence 0] combine to form Air..."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
The translator thinks it over for a bit, and then rejects Space for [essence 1] and reports ambiguous results for intelligence or self-awareness as [essence 14].

It also figures out a few more words. That second snippet now begins: "...Nothing is often [sensed] to negate other essences in combination, such as for example when it combines with Light to form its opposite, [essence 9]..."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
Something for [essence 9]: rejected.

Humans for [essence 14]: rejected.

The passage with the fewest untranslated words concerning [essence 14]:

"[essence 14] is sometimes called the immaterial counterpart of Life. Like many of the immaterial essences, its uses can be [adjective]. Although infrequently useful in [noun]s, it is [adjective] in the construction of [noun]s."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
It likes Darkness for [essence 9]! The substitution propagates. The first sixteen entries of the long chart now read:

NumberEssence Name[noun][noun]
0Nothing0
1[essence 1]0
2[essence 2]0
3Light0
4Matter0
5Air1Matter + Nothing
6Water1Matter + [essence 1]
7Earth1Matter + [essence 2]
8Fire1Matter + Light
9Darkness1Light + Nothing
10[essence 10]1Light + [essence 1]
11[essence 11]1Light + [essence 2]
12[essence 12]1[essence 2] + Nothing
13Life1[essence 2] + [essence 1]
14[essence 14]1Nothing + [essence 1]
15[essence 15]1Nothing + [essence 1] + [essence 2] + Light + Matter
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Energy and Sound fail for 1 and 2... but the translator tries Energy for essence 10 and finds that it works very well.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
Speed: no.

Movement: also no, but slightly less no than Speed.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
The journal has a bunch of untranslated words too, but contains many decipherable tidbits that are useful or interesting.

For example, jotted notes on the theory of magic:

"[essence 1] and [essence 2] are opposites, but Nothing is sort of opposite [essence 1]..."

"Life and Air makes [essence 76], Life and Water makes [essence 82], Life and Earth makes [essence 88], Life and Fire makes [essence 94]? The first three make sense, but what's so fiery about [noun]s?..."

Recipes:

"[noun] [noun]: Life, [essence 88], [essence 94]. Much better than the book's." (A carefully drawn diagram follows, using the three indicated colours. Then there is a little cartoon of what might plausibly be a plant with rashers of bacon in place of flowers.)

Quite a long stretch of mostly-untranslated personal notes in the vein of "I [acted on] the [noun] today but I don't know if it'll stay [adjective]", and many others even less comprehensible at the current translation level.

And then:

"[Profane exclamation]! I'm a [profane adjective] [noun]! I almost [acted on] my essence spheres on the [noun]! [Proper noun] would've [acted on] me!"
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-23 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Motion, Force, Gravity, Unity, and Binding: no, no, no, no, and no.

Well, some of them are slightly better than completely wrong on some of the essences - Unity and Binding are wrong-but-not-that-wrong for [essence 2], and Motion and Force are wrong-but-not-that-wrong for [essence 1].