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Glen ([personal profile] intricate_engineer) wrote in [community profile] glowfic2016-01-15 12:50 pm

between then and know

It was a trap.
Glen should have seen it coming, but she'd thought the offer might be genuine. Wasn't the possibility of immortality worth the risk?
Well, not this time.
Her pendant, her way out, was broken.
She tried to use it anyway.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
It sure is dark down there.
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Tink... clack...
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Back at the hill, everything is (very predictably) just as she left it. And the translator has figured out a bunch more words.

Those circular diagrams are recipes of some kind.

For example, the first one in the book: 'Rich Soil'. The diagram depicts an arrangement of interlocking squares traced in green and brown ink; the legend describes the brown ink as 'Essence of Earth' and the green as 'Essence of Life'; the partly-translated blurb advises, "Draw on an 8- or 12-[unit of distance] [noun] in an open space. Produces 16-24 [unit of volume]s of soil depending on diagram size. Draw quickly to avoid unwanted [action]."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
The essences appear in the chart at the end of the book, and in many diagram legends where they are associated with a consistent selection of ink colours, and in a few other places that haven't been translated well enough to do her any good.

That coloured-and-labelled sixteen-circles diagram, partly translated, now looks like this.

And the first sixteen entries in the chart look like this, with small appropriately coloured circles next to each row:

NumberEssence Name[noun][noun]
0[essence 0]0
1[essence 1]0
2[essence 2]0
3Light0
4Matter0
5Air1Matter + [essence 0]
6Water1Matter + [essence 1]
7Earth1Matter + [essence 2]
8Fire1Matter + Light
9[essence 9]1Light + [essence 0]
10[essence 10]1Light + [essence 1]
11[essence 11]1Light + [essence 2]
12[essence 12]1[essence 2] + [essence 0]
13Life1[essence 2] + [essence 1]
14[essence 14]1[essence 0] + [essence 1]
15[essence 15]1[essence 0] + [essence 1] + [essence 2] + Light + Matter
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 11:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Nothing for [essence 0] is a tentatively promising substitution, according to the translator.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
[essence 9] as Death: ambiguous results. Not right, but not totally wrong either.
[essence 2] as Energy: pretty clearly negative.
[essence 1] as Time: slightly less negative, but still probably not right.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Darkness is a much worse match than Nothing for [essence 0].

Time is a poor match for [essence 2], about as bad as it was for [essence 1].
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
Lots and lots of recipe-diagrams. So many recipe-diagrams.

And:

"As the zeroth essence, [essence 0] represents the [state or condition] at the beginning of all things, even before the first essence, [essence 1]: the [state or condition] before the [noun]. [essence 2] brings the possibility of [noun] to the [adjective] [essence 1], and Light and Matter [act on] that possibility..."

"...[essence 0] is often [sensed] to [act on] other essences in combination, such as for example when it combines with Light to form its [noun], [essence 9], or with Life to form [essence 56]. But sometimes the result is more [adjective], as when [essence 2] and [essence 0] combine to form [essence 12], or more [adjective], as when Matter and [essence 0] combine to form Air..."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
The translator thinks it over for a bit, and then rejects Space for [essence 1] and reports ambiguous results for intelligence or self-awareness as [essence 14].

It also figures out a few more words. That second snippet now begins: "...Nothing is often [sensed] to negate other essences in combination, such as for example when it combines with Light to form its opposite, [essence 9]..."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
Something for [essence 9]: rejected.

Humans for [essence 14]: rejected.

The passage with the fewest untranslated words concerning [essence 14]:

"[essence 14] is sometimes called the immaterial counterpart of Life. Like many of the immaterial essences, its uses can be [adjective]. Although infrequently useful in [noun]s, it is [adjective] in the construction of [noun]s."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
It likes Darkness for [essence 9]! The substitution propagates. The first sixteen entries of the long chart now read:

NumberEssence Name[noun][noun]
0Nothing0
1[essence 1]0
2[essence 2]0
3Light0
4Matter0
5Air1Matter + Nothing
6Water1Matter + [essence 1]
7Earth1Matter + [essence 2]
8Fire1Matter + Light
9Darkness1Light + Nothing
10[essence 10]1Light + [essence 1]
11[essence 11]1Light + [essence 2]
12[essence 12]1[essence 2] + Nothing
13Life1[essence 2] + [essence 1]
14[essence 14]1Nothing + [essence 1]
15[essence 15]1Nothing + [essence 1] + [essence 2] + Light + Matter
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-19 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Energy and Sound fail for 1 and 2... but the translator tries Energy for essence 10 and finds that it works very well.

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