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Glen ([personal profile] intricate_engineer) wrote in [community profile] glowfic2016-01-15 12:50 pm

between then and know

It was a trap.
Glen should have seen it coming, but she'd thought the offer might be genuine. Wasn't the possibility of immortality worth the risk?
Well, not this time.
Her pendant, her way out, was broken.
She tried to use it anyway.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
No good way to climb down there without caving in part of the edge. It probably wouldn't be too bad if she did cave in part of the edge, but there's definitely a risk of injury.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
The ground has a gradual downward slope in this direction.

Eventually it becomes pretty clear that there is, in fact, a lot of water ahead. Either an ocean or a very large lake. But it's farther away than the hill she just came from, and at an increasing downhill slope: it could easily take her another hour and a half to walk there and then four or five hours to get back to the hill.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Dead trees, dead trees, a small sinkhole she has to detour around, so many dead trees, a dip in the ground of unknown depth filled up almost completely with sun-bleached white bones, even more dead trees...

At last: the ocean, or possibly lake. At its edge, the dry cracked earth transitions into pale golden sand. There is nothing growing along the shoreline, at least not visibly.

The water is nastily cold, although after this long of a walk at this temperature she might very well find it refreshing. And it's much clearer and nicer-smelling than the stuff from the hill-pool and the hole-pool.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
There are gentle swelling waves that mostly don't obstruct the view through the water, and it's clear enough that she can see the bottom for about thirty feet out if she stands just above the line of wet sand where the waves strike. In that interval, there is no visible sea-life of any kind.

The water is too cold to taste of much, but definitely salty.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
The shore curves slightly, wobbling inward and outward in long arcs.

There's not a whole lot to see except dead plants and water.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
They look pretty dead. The roots are dry and brittle; there are no obvious fruits or seeds.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
There is nothing to see along the shore except more shore.

The odd splotch, when she gets close, turns out to be a pit so deep that even with the sun high overhead she can't see the bottom. It's maybe ten feet across, irregularly shaped, and since most of the edge is made of solid stone it's even safe to walk right up to. Probably.

(The translator, meanwhile, has verified to its satisfaction that this language uses a base 16 number system. Now it understands all the numbers.)
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
It sure is dark down there.
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Tink... clack...
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Back at the hill, everything is (very predictably) just as she left it. And the translator has figured out a bunch more words.

Those circular diagrams are recipes of some kind.

For example, the first one in the book: 'Rich Soil'. The diagram depicts an arrangement of interlocking squares traced in green and brown ink; the legend describes the brown ink as 'Essence of Earth' and the green as 'Essence of Life'; the partly-translated blurb advises, "Draw on an 8- or 12-[unit of distance] [noun] in an open space. Produces 16-24 [unit of volume]s of soil depending on diagram size. Draw quickly to avoid unwanted [action]."
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
The essences appear in the chart at the end of the book, and in many diagram legends where they are associated with a consistent selection of ink colours, and in a few other places that haven't been translated well enough to do her any good.

That coloured-and-labelled sixteen-circles diagram, partly translated, now looks like this.

And the first sixteen entries in the chart look like this, with small appropriately coloured circles next to each row:

NumberEssence Name[noun][noun]
0[essence 0]0
1[essence 1]0
2[essence 2]0
3Light0
4Matter0
5Air1Matter + [essence 0]
6Water1Matter + [essence 1]
7Earth1Matter + [essence 2]
8Fire1Matter + Light
9[essence 9]1Light + [essence 0]
10[essence 10]1Light + [essence 1]
11[essence 11]1Light + [essence 2]
12[essence 12]1[essence 2] + [essence 0]
13Life1[essence 2] + [essence 1]
14[essence 14]1[essence 0] + [essence 1]
15[essence 15]1[essence 0] + [essence 1] + [essence 2] + Light + Matter
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 11:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Nothing for [essence 0] is a tentatively promising substitution, according to the translator.
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[personal profile] pythbox 2016-01-18 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
[essence 9] as Death: ambiguous results. Not right, but not totally wrong either.
[essence 2] as Energy: pretty clearly negative.
[essence 1] as Time: slightly less negative, but still probably not right.

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